The feedback I got on my last elevator pitch was very helpful and encouraging. I got a lot of positive comments on my pitch, so I did not want to change it too much. However, someone did tell me that I should have made more eye contact with the camera, so that is what I was focusing on in this video.
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 2
The feedback I got on my last elevator pitch was very helpful and encouraging. I got a lot of positive comments on my pitch, so I did not want to change it too much. However, someone did tell me that I should have made more eye contact with the camera, so that is what I was focusing on in this video.
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Tyler, your app sounds alot like Uber! Overall I liked your pitch and it seemed like you had fun with it. You did good with making more eye contact with the camera. Since I have to give some kind of critical feedback, maybe dress in business casual attire like you would if you were pitching your idea in front of a crowd. Check out my post here:
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I really like your idea for a reliable and reasonably priced ride, although it does sound a lot like Uber, Lyft etc. So good idea, but maybe a little late in the game. To improve your video you might want to dress in maybe casual business attire. Also, your camera man seems to have stuck his finger in your shot. Anyway, if you care to check out my video it is below.
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Tyler, I hate to add to it, but the first thing I thought of when I heard your idea was Uber. Good thinking with the concept, but your competition will be fierce. Think about adding more components that will make your idea more unique. Good job on learning from the previous pitch. You can see my pitch here...http://acwilliams83.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html
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